Ziyi Tang, University of Pennsylvania
I appreciate your hard work in my Master’s application. You are a professional and experienced editor with high efficiency.
I like your revision of my Statement of Purpose and Personal Statement. Your revision is very well-structured and precisely express what I want to say.
With your help, I received an offer from MIT’s Master of City Planning with 75% tuition waiver and an offer from University of Cambridge’s Master of Architecture and Urban Studies. Thank you so much for your patient help and for being so awesome!
Best,
Ziyi
[July 2020]
我非常感谢您在我的学术型硕士申请中的帮助与投入。作为一名母语非英语的学生，我的个人成熟与研究计划有很多表达不够清晰的地方，您作为一个专业、高效且经验丰富的编辑极大地提升了我的文书的专业性。您修订的内容逻辑清晰且紧密，非常精准地表达了我想表达的意思。
在您的帮助下，我收到了麻省理工学院城市规划硕士的录取（75%奖学金以及带薪研究助理职位），以及剑桥大学建筑与城市研究硕士的录取。 非常感谢您耐心和专业的帮助！